Zimbly Cars » copy editing http://cars.zimbly.com By An Indian Automotive Enthusiast Thu, 15 Dec 2011 13:09:48 +0000 en hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v= Tata Xenon Copy Editing Fail http://cars.zimbly.com/2009/04/tata-xenon-copy-editing-fail/ http://cars.zimbly.com/2009/04/tata-xenon-copy-editing-fail/#comments Wed, 08 Apr 2009 09:07:43 +0000 Sushil http://cars.zimbly.com/?p=191 I went to the Tata Xenon Site today after seeing an ad on one of the automotive websites I frequent. I was just telling someone that the Xenon would be a hell of a sight with a roll bar, wide tires and whole bank of heavy duty rally type lamps on the roof and of [...]]]> I went to the Tata Xenon Site today after seeing an ad on one of the automotive websites I frequent. I was just telling someone that the Xenon would be a hell of a sight with a roll bar, wide tires and whole bank of heavy duty rally type lamps on the roof and of course a high lift kit – just the thing scare a lot of cabbies/autos/bikers out of the way :-) .  However looking at the site I may have to revise my opinion of the vehicle of being an “All Terrain  Conqueror” – the copy makes me think it is not a conqueror but a conquest. Click on the image to see the “fail”.

Tata Xenon Copy Editing Fail

Tata Xenon Copy Editing Fail

 

Dear Tata Motors,

       I tried to contact you with this but this resulted in another page that didnt work – another “fail”. Here is a screenshot of my attempt (I blanked out my email). FYI – The submit button doesnt show up on your site. Finally I still filled out a lot of info I didnt want to and then submitted. Hope someone reads it. Click on the image to see a larger version.

Tata Xenon Fail 2

Tata Xenon Fail 2

Regards,

Sushil

 

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